11.23.2008

Fate of Indigo I

Still shining with the faint glow of childhood
Ignorant of the intricacies of manipulation
by the selfish and flawed
He was plunged into the madness of lust

Though his journey made him a man
The subsequent conflict disfigured him as well
for the temptress's gaze was damning
And it darkened his heart thereafter


This needs work. Anyone with even a hint of an idea should not hesitate to make a suggestion.

And I still have to finish part 2, and start part 3.

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